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  • Many mistakes!!!!

    I dont understand how the esay got an A plus with so many typos and spelling mistakes, in addition it did not fully reveal the case!
    • 30/01/2007
    • 10:39:38
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good for those who aready get it!

    The article is hard to comprehend for those who have limited info on the subject. In addition it is too short.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 10:00:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good info

    It shows that the person that wrote this essay has put a lot of work and effort into it!
    • 30/01/2007
    • 09:58:16
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A problem

    There seems to be a problem or some text missing in the paragraph before the last.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 09:56:55
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good and insightful

    The project could provide a good basis for any HR, Management, or marketing project.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 09:49:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A very good compilaion.

    It would help to add an introduction and a conclusion to the essay because this way it is not refined.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 09:40:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    I didn't think that a reader could be as insightful asthe author was. When I read the essay it related to me. It is excellent.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 09:01:32
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very insightful

    The content is extremely detailed and gives all the information a person needs to know about DJs!
    • 30/01/2007
    • 08:53:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Short , right to the point however not descriptive enough!

    The essay describes three inventions: the spinning jenny, the locomotive, and the pump and gives basic introductory material. In the introduction we get the idea that the author will tell us the impact of those inventions, but unfortunately he doesn't.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 08:29:53
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Too many details

    It is obvious that the writer has interpolated her personal experiences. However here it is a weakness since it starts off with too many uninviting details. And the moment the essay kicks off and gets to be interesting it is abruptly cut.
    • 30/01/2007
    • 08:18:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.