Good integration of the text. Also, the notion of history and memory are well expressed.
- 05/08/2008
- 05:42:22
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i thought that was fantastic! i thought the detail was greatthe story had a lot of depth to it well done
- 15/07/2008
- 04:33:55
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i agree with all the below. definitely and good read! could be improved in the way its written but was still enjoyable!good stuff
- 15/07/2008
- 04:13:14
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that was really good!it was interesting the whole way through! well done!
- 15/07/2008
- 03:48:21
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well done. the analysis of values was well carried out. however i thought it may have been a stronger essay if context was further discussed
- 12/06/2008
- 06:03:37
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This story is good how ever it seems to be lacking suspense
- 16/05/2008
- 21:28:09
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nice concise summary of the character
- 10/05/2008
- 19:14:24
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i think overall this was a good essay. how ever i do not agree with "Looking over it we cannot specifically say to what extent of a tragic character Macbeth is" as it may seem as though you are not answering the question or sitting on the fencebut good otherwise!
- 10/05/2008
- 18:40:18
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hey this is a nice essay! the brief intros into the text is great!
- 04/02/2008
- 02:52:36
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This is overall a good essay. Throughout the essay you have mentioned contrast. However you failed to mention the contrast of the paragraphs. Eg the contrast of the peaceful 1st paragraph to the chaotic second.
- 11/01/2008
- 06:18:39
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Your essay is well done. However it could be improved if you were to go into greater depth on how and why. You have covered the what very well.
- 09/01/2008
- 21:20:39
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Great amount of detail. This will also help me as it will give me ideas to consider when analyzing my case study. So thanks is in order. Thank you and good job.
- 16/11/2007
- 22:31:39
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This is a very good attempt, how ever when I read it I got the feeling it rattled on a little bit. Some sentences should be combine/ rewritten together in order to cut straight to the point.
- 16/11/2007
- 22:27:11
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