Just wanted to let you know- I am a recent graduate from LPN school, and writing research papers on different topics in nursing was difficult for me. I think this paper would receive an A because it is well written, very organized, and it includes a great clinical example throughout the paper. Good job!
- 14/09/2007
- 06:16:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the second comment. This essay definitely needs to be more specific on the subject matter, and have relevant facts that can be supported with research, and not just stereotype the entire topic. To improve this essay, I suggest using a compare and contrast approach to convince the reader on why not to do drugs.
- 17/05/2007
- 09:45:41
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very organized in content, and had a lot of good statements.
- 24/04/2007
- 06:48:33
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked the subject matter, and thought it was well organized. It could have used more facts to back up the theory.
- 23/04/2007
- 20:08:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.