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  • Can be improved

    1) a conclusion should be added.2) if the effect of the method is also stated, it would be more effectiveOtherwise, a good essay
    • 11/11/2002
    • 04:52:41
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • Too Brief

    Well structured essay but it is way too brief, specially at a Ph.D level!!It didn't state the effect of peregrines' extinction, and the essay actually states more negatives (i.e. banning of guns, pesticide and DDT, giving up large areas for falcons...etc)For readers that are not familiar with the topic, it is very hard for this essay to take effect. "Why do we have to save them? What benifits do we get from them?" one may ask.
    • 11/11/2002
    • 04:46:36
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.