The main thing you need to do for this paper is development on your ideas and forming your thesis a bit better. Your ideas have some merit, you just need to organize it a little better and develop your thoughts.
- 20/04/2007
- 11:28:27
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Very well researched and technically sound, but some of the word choice and diction can be improved upon to make the paper flow better. Look at how each point is introduced and develop that better instead of just rushing right into it.
- 19/04/2007
- 11:15:23
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Although Wikipedia is a good place to find information, be sure to go to other sources as well. Go to the library and check out an almanac or some geography books on Honduras. I am not criticizing by any means, just letting you know how to improve your writing.
- 19/04/2007
- 07:45:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay was excellent with strong points and counterpoints directly relating to the thesis. Great Job!
- 19/04/2007
- 07:24:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.