This was a very original story, with the personal touch to it. I found it very touching. Very nicely written - good job!
- 14/08/2007
- 07:49:18
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This was filled with originality and I could relate to it. Nicely written and guaranteed to capture interest. :)
- 14/08/2007
- 07:26:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I loved this story! It must have taken lots of imagination and creativity as well. Very nicely written - Good job!
- 12/08/2007
- 23:23:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It was very well-written, one of the best comparative essays I've read. Keep up the good work!
- 12/06/2007
- 06:10:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The story is quite interesting and it captured my attention. However, there are many grammatical and sentence structure mistakes in it.
- 06/06/2007
- 05:48:07
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting and well-written. Testimonies from the people involved added a personal touch to it and made it more real.
- 04/06/2007
- 05:43:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
It was short yet meaningful, but what really spiced it up was the touch of humour. Good story with a good lesson in it.
- 04/06/2007
- 04:50:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I liked the way this author connected the topic to examples that we can relate to. By using these examples and elaborating on them, the author managed to add life to his/her essay. I'd give this essay a thumbs up!
- 31/05/2007
- 06:17:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.