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  • ESSAY REALLY NEEDS REVISION....

    THIS ESSAY IS RATHER JUVENILE,HOWEVER SOME FACTS ARE ABLE TO BE DETERMINED.TOO MANY USES OF SIMPLISTIC WORDS.(editors note: please don't type with CAPS LOCK on).
    • 03/12/2002
    • 10:53:09
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • VERY GOOD ESSAY.....

    NICE USE OF VOCABULARY.
    • 03/12/2002
    • 07:37:35
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok,but...

    needs to be a bit longer as this is a college essay
    • 18/11/2002
    • 16:35:19
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.