Only one of the works cited sources is used throughout the entire essay. You may want to consider using more of your sources. Also, the use of "I", or in this paper's case "our" is prohibited in standard APA style papers.
- 30/07/2007
- 00:15:37
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There are only two citations from the works cited page used throughout the entire essay and yet there are 8 total on the works cited page. You should consider using all 8 of the works cited in the essay to avoid any copyright infringements.
- 30/07/2007
- 00:08:27
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If you have nine citations on the works cited page and nothing cited within the essay itself, how is that valid APA style?
- 30/07/2007
- 00:03:19
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