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I think your essay is great- if you were in high school. But you're in college now, I think your writing should have a level of sophistication." Yeah I am here this is going to be home." this line is not a proper sentence, for example." flea my country"- its "flee" not flea. "flea" is for the flea market.
- 25/09/2007
- 02:17:03
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Memories
The way you write is way beyond your years. Good job! Very insightful, But you should try to write longer essays.
- 20/09/2007
- 02:23:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.