The essay is full of different examples supporting your idea on the three main themes in the book. However, I find something wrong in the 'hatred' part. The peasant's son was killed by the coach, which was Marquis St. Evremonde's but not Ernest Defarge's, Marquis was responsibe for the accident but not Defarge. This is quite a great misconception, but I agree Defarge did show his hated toward the French aristocrats.Another problem of your essay is you lack of elaboration, it's more important than numerous examples and quotes.
- 27/09/2007
- 00:44:45
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I cannot agree with this statement more. However, in our daily life, good mannered people are becoming rare, it's because the world is becoming more and more practical, it requires quick skills and efficiency, people become cool and independent because they don't want to waste effort on treating others nicely, it's a tragedy indeed!
- 25/09/2007
- 03:46:58
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I do agree, the brain is the most important component of human body. Memorizing things, is one of the most important functions in our brains. I believe if we didn't have the ability to memorize things, human race wouldn't continue and kept on developing.
- 20/09/2007
- 05:08:29
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Too much retelling, lack of elaboration and further explanation. However, you can list all the important influences of Hermia upon Lysander and Demetrius throughout the story.
- 19/09/2007
- 03:52:19
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Good introduction! With the introduction, I fully understand what's the meaning of 'phobia', with the further organized elaborations and detailed informations, I totally think that this is an extremely well planned informative essay.
- 19/09/2007
- 03:40:55
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Personally, I really love to read books, and I can't imagine what my life would be if there were no writers existed. So I totally agree with your point ' a relationship of mutual benefit or dependence'
- 18/09/2007
- 06:34:54
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I totally agree the importance of family in our lives so that I think family health care is really important to a family. What I mean is keeping a family healthy can guarantee all family members live in a happy and joyful life, it's the most important thing in everyone's life!!!
- 17/09/2007
- 04:53:16
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Really good organization. Ideas and well presented. Especially the introduction, it's really logically and shows the writer is a logical person.
- 17/09/2007
- 04:48:59
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Your introduction isn't clear enough, it's quite confusing when I just read through your introduction, I don't have any ideas about what you are going to talk about if you don't add a title.
- 11/09/2007
- 05:41:02
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Girls follow the slimming trend blindly. Why do I say so? In recent years, advertisements, especially those which are broadcasting on buses promote slim bodies, they show all the negative side of obese bodies, and stress on the beauty of slim bodies and its attractiveness.However, I don't agree with those advertisements, I believe that the true beauty can only be shown by one's confident and charming character, but not only his/her appearance. I think it's so skin-deep to judge someone on their body size.All in all, I don't agree with the modern girls who follow the slimming trend blindly, I think they should have their own personal style and only this can make someone's life fruitful and happy.
- 05/09/2007
- 21:10:41
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I used to love milk and daily products a lot. However, I found that if I kept drinking high calcium low fat milk(250ml per day), I would gain weight, about 1 pound per week. That's the reason why I have stopped drinking milk every day, instead, I eat oatmeal with a small portion of milk every morning, I think it's more healthier. But, in my opinion, daily products are still important to me cause I love the smooth texture of the food, especially cheesecake!
- 03/09/2007
- 21:46:41
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Personally, I think disappointment really makes someone strong. Since after the disappointment, we will understand what others can't offer to us and we will have to be strong and accept the fact. I love the phrase 'puberty is a time that many people have an emotional roller coaster ride ' , it's most suitable to describe teenagers.
- 03/09/2007
- 21:32:41
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