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Nice Summary
You do a nice job explaining Milgram's experiment and some of the implications but you should avoid using passive tense so often. Be sure about your writing and that your opinions are important and can be put into statements. : )- 18/01/2008
- 07:31:10
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Lots of good stuff
This essay is a fine accumulation of various theories on obedience and which have conflict with each other. There is allot of info that can be cited so thanks for posting. The essay is very structurally weak however and would need revision to be acceptable on a college level. If I were to make some minor changes they would include a more comprehensive opening and closing paragraph.- 16/01/2008
- 07:09:26
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