User Details For: rcarmichael
Essay List
Comparative study between the statement "In the wild" and the film "Blade Runner"
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"Blade Runner": In depth look at the "love" scene with Rachael and Deckard.
- 600 words (2 pages)
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"Six Degrees of Separation" - The Central Theme
- 701 words (3 pages)
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Bionic Eye: This report focuses on the development of the Bionic Eye, the people who work in this field, the effects this product has on society, & recent innovations.
- 1828 words (7 pages)
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Determination of Acceleration due to Gravity
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Christian Ethics
- 2177 words (9 pages)
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Superficiality
This article is much too brief and superficial. Rather than recounting and simply stating facts, try to get underneath it all and analyse the text you are given, even if it is on a topic so plain as this. Also, when writing on your personal opinions, though a good idea, keep to third person rather than first – it is quite simply more academic if you do so. With your bibliography, it is obvious you haven't used many sources. Try to broaden your horizons, do a bit more in depth study.- 08/11/2007
- 03:22:06
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