this article was very limited in information towards the reader. it just left the reader wanting more.
- 26/04/2008
- 10:41:49
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this article speaks about many statistics that hazing has done from deaths to injuries. i would have like stories in certain high schools and was actually happened than rather just saying an overall number.
- 26/04/2008
- 10:39:44
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I would have like for you to have references to go back and give more information to be able to expand on the topic. I thought that it was good.
- 26/04/2008
- 10:31:21
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I did not like this essay/ topic I was lost from the very beginning. Unorganized is what I have to say for this one.
- 25/02/2008
- 15:51:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The paper could have been improved by listing the methods, therapies, etc. or simply making a table for the most part this paper was enjoyable with many factual information. references would have liked to be seen on there just in case someone wants to read up more on this topic.
- 05/02/2008
- 15:20:07
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This paper could have been written to actually grab the readers attention. this paper is really a drag on. their is nothing exciting to read just the facts of this in it.
- 05/02/2008
- 15:16:03
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makes a good statement about death penalty and did a little bit of research to get statistics to back up his opinions.
- 01/12/2007
- 21:30:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this essay. it is so very true about the % rate about the if 1 parent is obese the kid has a 50% chance of being the same way. in society today people do not want to fit exercise in their daily routine. they are always on the go that is why the fast food industry is making the money. loved that it had the statistics and cited.
- 01/12/2007
- 21:25:45
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
could have been formatted differently to look a bit more professional.
- 01/12/2007
- 18:48:27
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
should have spoken about what have steroids done in sports and what is changing to keep your audience reeled into the essay.
- 27/11/2007
- 16:45:57
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I really enjoyed that this essay was formatted like if it were a research paper. format was very good. it included introduction, literature. revision, method, experiment,discussion and resources. just might be a little short.
- 27/11/2007
- 16:37:57
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I did not really like the too much of listing part. resources are good. essay needs to be more appealing to the reader.
- 27/11/2007
- 16:34:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I liked that surveys were used, that "Healthy People 2010" was even looked at. I give them props for that.
- 27/11/2007
- 16:25:23
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this was more of an informative questionnaire. it was basically about benefits of PE and what is was. did not really like it. it was not too enjoyable to read.
- 27/11/2007
- 16:19:55
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not very informative. it could have been better with more research put into it. it has no references.
- 27/11/2007
- 15:54:16
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It could have been more juiced up. it needs more information about what it is all about. it hasn´t got references it seems to me that this essay was just submitted as a quick easy essay that was put together with no thought or effort.
- 27/11/2007
- 15:52:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really liked this essay over the other essays that I have read on this site. it is very informative and pin points everything that you would want and like to know about Parkinson's disease. it explains it in detail. what it is, the symptoms, difficulties, treatments and etc.
- 27/11/2007
- 15:44:19
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I enjoyed this essay. I just might have been a bit disappointed that there were no references listed that we could have used to further our knowledge if needed. references help one become more familiar with diseases and symptoms that may occur.
- 27/11/2007
- 15:23:03
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I would like to have added more studies to back up this information. Not enough information but some of this info. is indeed true with anxiety increasing performance. I can relate that to sports because I was an ex athlete and now a coach.
- 21/11/2007
- 09:01:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I very much so enjoyed reading this essay due to the fact that most of this information is true. I would like the parents to read this because many parents out there are not really aware of the benefits that pe has on them till it is too late.
- 21/11/2007
- 08:40:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.