Nice list of sources, but you need to defend your position better. You can't just say in the last para., "oh and my opinion is this." Your whole essay needs to help you convey your point, your view, rather than just your last para.
- 09/03/2009
- 19:32:10
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I like all your sources....greatly helped me! Thanks
- 09/03/2009
- 19:22:50
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Nicely laid out essay with good bibliography!
- 27/05/2008
- 15:20:45
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As to a comment by Beerlove, I have to say that, everyone should be proud of who they are and if children at young age have a low self-esteem and are always low on confidence just because they aren't perfect, then our whole society will crumble into pieces.Nice essay by the way!
- 25/05/2008
- 16:27:54
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Every teacher in the US and the world should read this! It makes complete sense!
- 25/05/2008
- 16:14:37
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I like the way you planned this essays and led the reader. And yes, I agree with you.
- 25/05/2008
- 16:11:54
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This essay should be viewed by every teacher in the US. There simply is too much homework these days for kids to enjoy life.Again, nice essay!
- 17/03/2008
- 17:23:47
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where are the Documents???
- 05/02/2008
- 09:48:03
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That is one essay that clearly states the point and does a great job on proving that point!
- 20/01/2008
- 16:46:59
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