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  • Hmmm

    well the part about Aids being in the rural area stands out quite a bit ad some info is a little iffy. Maybe your topic should resemble more so the rural stuff since its in there quite a bit.
    • 12/10/2003
    • 09:12:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    for al the information that could be said, i though that this essay was rather short and did not focus on the broad aspect of STDs. Rather, it was more so on just a few. I think more could have been said about the topic.
    • 08/10/2003
    • 17:59:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    good job. there was an excellenbt amount if info on this, as well as a nice table of contents and sources cited. Pretty damn good.
    • 08/10/2003
    • 16:59:52
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm....

    I think that this was an ok essay. The fact that you have a bibliography is great. Organization and contend could have a been a little better
    • 29/11/2002
    • 19:03:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.