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  • One of your largest problems

    Look at your sources. No, it's not that wikipedia is user-written. It's the people who write the material — for both your sources. They are both Western sources (Israeli-allied). This essay contains a very heavy bias due to that. For example, the phrase "Hamas is a terrorist faction" is straight out of the Israeli playbook, while any Arab will tell you that it is actually a political party, of which some of it's members participate in radical activities that could be called terrorism. If you want to improve the essay, I suggest you look at sources from both sides of the conflict.
    • 30/10/2008
    • 04:02:25
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  • An Anarchist's Opinion

    Not all that great, to be honest. You fail to properly explain any of background of anarchy, and define "anarchy" as what popular opinion defines it as, not what anarchists define it as. Also, you make several unfounded suggestions (the community-militia idea) that seem to have no basis in fact. I suggest re-writing the essay after looking at some modern anarchist works of literature.
    • 30/10/2008
    • 03:50:18
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  • Good Essay

    You get very in depth, but avoid making the essay too long. You used examples well. I like it.
    • 30/10/2008
    • 03:16:28
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