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  • Very Interesting

    I think you did a good job drawing the reader in with dramatic illustrations. I think the only thing you need to address would be small issues in grammar. Sometimes having a friend proof read an essay will help you avoid making spelling mistakes or forgetting words in a sentence. Nothing like having another set of eyes.Interesting and funny story.
    • 08/03/2008
    • 19:30:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good use of support

    I thought the essay was well written. It also made good use of the sources to support his/her case. Overall, I thought it was a good job. Thanks=)
    • 11/02/2008
    • 22:09:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.