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  • To Tell or to Lie, a look at ancient philosophy

    This is a good infomative essay. It made things much clearer for me.
    • 25/02/2004
    • 18:18:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Rhetoric in language.

    Nicely written and are very infomative.
    • 25/02/2004
    • 18:13:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The Vampire: What boundaries does it threaten?

    2 words. Holy Sh&t. This must be the longest essay that ever got written by a 2nd year. You have done good job in researching for this piece. I congratuate you.
    • 11/11/2003
    • 19:26:50
    • Score: 20 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • In 100 Years...

    The world will still be the same :POk so maybe not or whatever; maybe we'll create an eternal exlixer (or how do you spell that word) to life to see what's it like but there's no perfect world in 100 or even 1000. Things never last is what i learn in my history class sadly.
    • 11/11/2003
    • 19:16:35
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Describes the who, when, what and how it was developed of the big bang theory.

    There's too many facts and no opinionated explaination in this essay. I've read throught it and just don't understand most of what this essay said except the def of the big bang theory. Be more clearly next time. Keep on trying
    • 11/11/2003
    • 19:11:39
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Heroes

    Pretty short essay and the points are very typical and general. i think it would be better paper if it includes more specific details examples maybe. Intro and Conclusion might need a do-over.
    • 11/11/2003
    • 19:05:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Communis and capitalism and which i would rath live in

    This essay seems effortless, it needs more examples and an introduction. If this is an essay written at home, it's bad; If it's on a test, then it's average, In my opion. At least put some effort in the title (Spelling error and so on :)
    • 18/09/2003
    • 17:19:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Stay Cold

    Very interesting essay. Well written and organized but try not to use first person too much on your next essay. and you'r a 9th grader? That's pretty good.
    • 06/09/2003
    • 11:15:17
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Cyber Terrorism

    Good essay thought the paragraphs are not properly set. If the points you made are true that cyber terrorism could easily penetrate the U.S system, then it's a scary world for the U.S that only rely on computers now-a-days.
    • 27/07/2003
    • 10:45:27
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Social Psychology

    This is the best essay i've read today. I had psychology last year so i can relate to this paper. you are a good writer. I have to agree about the conformity points, thats how the world works these days. at least thats how i see it. But i like the stereotypes of men providing financial and women staying at home. and that Men sport should be for men and women should be for women. look at body-building and basketball, we don't want women to be macho and ripped looking do we?
    • 27/06/2003
    • 09:55:30
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Child Labor on "Walt Disney"

    This is a nicely written essay. Good Job. If all the things in the essay are true, then wow, i don't know what to think of Disney company anymore. To think a company that rich is that harsh. unbelievable.
    • 27/06/2003
    • 09:40:42
    • Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Spanish american war

    This was an Ok paper for a 10th grader. It is full of facts though and needs revision all over the place. And it need to be organize in better paragraph form( 1 or 2 sentence is not a paragraph). and isn't the destiny you write "magnetite destiny" suppose to be Manifest destiny? just wondering...
    • 27/06/2003
    • 09:24:47
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Killers or heroes

    This essay was very informative indeed. I read it without knowing the subject and when finished i now know it very well. Nice written. Good job.
    • 27/06/2003
    • 07:06:26
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Values

    This was an Average paper, being a 2nd year, with some good points. problems are revision (spellcheck,ect) and need longer paragraph in intro and conclusion. Good essay but average if this is a paper.
    • 27/06/2003
    • 06:42:58
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Athena

    i can see that You like to write about Myth :) as for this essay, it was very straightforward and simple. easy to follow. the part where she was a virgin but was a good mother left me wonder why. this is a nice essay overall.
    • 27/06/2003
    • 06:30:30
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice Examples

    Throughout your essay, you have examples to back it up and i thought your essay was a solid paper. It was simple but it's good enough. Only problem was the introduction, I, for one, don't know the myth about Perseus and you should explain more of the relationship between the family. I was confused throughout your first paragraph.
    • 26/06/2003
    • 16:18:21
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    There are many good points you have made in your essay. I agree with you about keeping the animal in their natural home, the wild life. We as humans are very greedy and we take things for granted, besides peoople growing up poorly. So this case (animal in zoos) are one of many that are not fair in nature.
    • 22/06/2003
    • 18:47:15
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ali essay remarks

    good essay. someone who doesnt know who ali is will know when they read this essay.
    • 06/02/2003
    • 20:07:00
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Crime essay

    good facts but most are useless without works cited
    • 09/12/2002
    • 22:48:07
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Communication Skills Essay

    good points but too repetitive
    • 09/12/2002
    • 16:50:53
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Comment

    good work. you have expained this concept well.
    • 09/12/2002
    • 16:49:38
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.