started of OK but way to short far a complex topic. more/more reliable sources needed. some obvious typos.quite easy to take information from.
- 24/04/2008
- 17:48:17
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
well structured, good use of statistics, clear message. Well done appropriate grade
- 22/04/2008
- 01:19:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Great persuasive essay! Good information (with references), well put forward.
- 21/03/2008
- 01:09:40
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The two quotes about Hitler should be together. Conclusion could be longer and should be a separate paragraph. otherwise well written - good examples
- 07/03/2008
- 02:03:17
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.