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  • Too concise?

    hi,I found your essay to be too consice. I agree with "smita285" that you could have expanded on your emotions. Also, I did not find the essay informatiave. I am in Grade 11, and I am already aware, to a greater detail, on hypertension.All in all, a good effort, but not an exceptional essay.Sorry!
    • 30/12/2002
    • 10:27:12
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.