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  • Superb!!

    Very well done. I like the details. The bibliography was perfect. Hope to see more essays from you.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:18:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job!

    Very well done. You mustn't forget that the American revolution also changed the minds of the French. Anyways good job and good sum up.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:17:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A very good point made!

    It was actually that people preferred the monarch than the terror. However, Napoleon took things under control and brought France to the peak. Good sum up and good job.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:16:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done..

    This was a very well written essay. I like the details and the conclusions sums up the whole thing. It should have a bibliography. Otherwise, a very good job.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:14:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice!!

    Very nice and descriptive essay. The bibliography adds up to the beauty of the essay. A very well done. Would help a person who does not know much about the revolution a lot.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:13:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Terror Certainly!

    Certainly terror played a huge role in the French revolution. Robespierre and the Jacobins manipulated the situation. That was evident from the terror. A very good job and a bibliography is always necessary to get a perfect essay. Very well done.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:12:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice!!

    I agree with you that enlightenment played a huge role. But you must not forget that the American revolution also played a major role. Also a bibliography would have enhanced the essay. Overall, very good job.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:10:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well done!

    A very descriptive essay and certainly Bastille was just the beginning and the tensions was what lead to the revolution. The bibliography adds to the excellence of the essay. very good job!
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:09:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Superb!

    A very new topic and very well explored and explained. Some quotations and evidence could have made the essay better. And very well done for such a good essay.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:06:49
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well done

    A very descriptive essay and most important gives the writer's point of view. A bibliography and some references or quotes are always necessary to make an essay better. Anyways. A very good Essay. good Job!
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:05:00
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative!

    Its a well written essay and you just need to add a bibliography and maybe some quotes to make it even better. Its good that you have explained the ideas well.
    • 21/09/2009
    • 18:02:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Nice:

    Excellent Job. I really like the details and although I have not studied Martin Luther King very much, this essay helped me understand Luther's ideas more. Excellent job!
    • 21/09/2009
    • 17:57:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.