I like how you used lots of names and then cited your sources.
- 05/10/2008
- 14:34:04
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Very clear and concise essay.And an MLA bibliography too.=D
- 06/06/2008
- 17:28:58
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Very limited vocabulary and fairly short. You could have cited some sources such as Linden Lab and people in the game. A few quotes would also be nice.
- 12/03/2008
- 14:50:05
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Extremely short and they cite wikipedia as a source. You should lengthen it and find a more reliable source than wikipedia.
- 12/03/2008
- 14:45:57
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
It seems a bit short.
- 10/03/2008
- 02:59:54
- Score: 7 out of 11 people found this comment useful.