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  • More on BAB

    The Basler Afrika Bibliographien (BAB) in Switzerland has been in existence since 1971 as a private specialist library and archive on southern Africa. It has an international reputation for its extensive holdings on Namibia.In 1994, the BAB was incorporated into the non-profit Carl Schlettwein Foundation. The BAB networks with institutions and researchers all over the world and is an associate member of the Centre for African Studies at the University of Basel and the Swiss African Society.The BAB supports and promotes the documentation and accessibility of library and archive holdings and engages in research on Namibia and southern Africa. The BAB also has its own publishing house and runs an antiquarian bookshop.Reference: www.baslerafrika.com
    • 05/04/2009
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  • How to spot unreliable medical sites

    Many sites provide valuable information, while others may have information that is unreliable or misleading. Answering these questions when you visit a new site will help you evaluate the information you find.1. Who runs this site?Any good health-related Web site should make it easy for you to learn who is responsible for the site and its information.2. Who pays for the site?It costs money to run a Web site. The source of a Web site's funding should be clearly stated or readily apparent. For example, Web addresses ending in ".gov" denote a Federal Government-sponsored site. You should know how the site pays for its existence. Does it sell advertising? Is it sponsored by a drug company? The source of funding can affect what content is presented, how the content is presented, and what the site owners want to accomplish on the site.3. What is the purpose of the site?This question is related to who runs and pays for the site. An "About This Site" link appears on many sites; if it's there, use it. The purpose of the site should be clearly stated and should help you evaluate the trustworthiness of the information.4. Where does the information come from?Many health/medical sites post information collected from other Web sites or sources. If the person or organization in charge of the site did not create the information, the original source should be clearly labeled.5. What is the basis of the information?In addition to identifying who wrote the material you are reading, the site should describe the evidence that the material is based on. Medical facts and figures should have references (such as to articles in medical journals). Also, opinions or advice should be clearly set apart from information that is "evidence-based" (that is, based on research results).6. How is the information selected?Is there an editorial board? Do people with excellent professional and scientific qualifications review the material before it is posted?7. How current is the information?Web sites should be reviewed and updated on a regular basis. It is particularly important that medical information be current. The most recent update or review date should be clearly posted. Even if the information has not changed, you want to know whether the site owners have reviewed it recently to ensure that it is still valid.8. How does the site choose links to other sites?Web sites usually have a policy about how they establish links to other sites. Some medical sites take a conservative approach and don't link to any other sites. Some link to any site that asks, or pays, for a link. Others only link to sites that have met certain criteria.9. What information about you does the site collect, and why?Web sites routinely track the paths visitors take through their sites to determine what pages are being used. However, many health Web sites ask for you to "subscribe" or "become a member." In some cases, this may be so that they can collect a user fee or select information for you that is relevant to your concerns. In all cases, this will give the site personal information about you. Any credible health site asking for this kind of information should tell you exactly what they will and will not do with it. Many commercial sites sell "aggregate" (collected) data about their users to other companies - information such as what percentage of their users are women with breast cancer, for example. In some cases they may collect and reuse information that is "personally identifiable," such as your ZIP code, gender, and birth date. Be certain that you read and understand any privacy policy or similar language on the site, and don't sign up for anything that you are not sure you fully understand.10. How does the site manage interactions with visitors?There should always be a way for you to contact the site owner if you run across problems or have questions or feedback. Is it moderated? If so, by whom, and why? It is always a good idea to spend time reading the discussion without joining in, so that you feel comfortable with the environment before becoming a participant.Reference: National Center for Complementary and Alternative Medicine website: nccam.nih.gov
    • 05/04/2009
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  • More info on Antarctica

    1/ If Antarctica's ice sheets melted, the worlds oceans would rise by 60 to 65 metres (200 - 210ft) - everywhere.2/ Antarctica is pushed into the earth by the weight of its ice sheets. If they melted, it would "spring back" about 500m (1 625 ft). It would do this v...e...r...y s...l...o...w...l...y taking about 10000 years to do so.Scotland and Scandinavia are still rebounding today after the last ice age - at the rate of half a meter a century in the Northern Baltic - the fastest place.3/ Antarctica is the best place in the world to find meteorites. Dark meteorites show up against the white expanse of ice and snow and don't get covered by vegetation. In some places, the way the ice flows concentrates meteorites there. The ice makes them gather in one place.4/ The cold and dry conditions in the "Dry Valleys" region of Antarctica are so close to those on Mars that NASA did testing there for the Viking mission. It has not rained in the dry valleys for at least 2 million years.5/ One of the biggest icebergs ever (possibly the biggest iceberg ever) broke free from the Ross ice shelf in Antarctica in 2000.It was 295km (183 miles) long and 37km (23 miles) wide, with a surface area of 11,000 sq km (4,250 square miles) above water - and 10 times bigger below. It's similar in size to The Gambia, Qatar, The Bahamas, or Connecticut.8/ A domestic deep freeze runs at about -20°C. The mean summer temperature on the great East Antarctica icecap is -30°C and mean winter temperature around -60°C. That's a lot colder than your freezer!The lowest ever temperature recorded was at the Russian Vostok station. It was - 89.6°C9/ When the Antarctic sea-ice begins to expand at the beginning of winter, it advances by around 40,000 square miles (100,000 square kilometres) per day, and eventually doubles the size of Antarctica, adding up to an extra 20 million square kilometres of ice around the land mass.That's one and a half USA's, two Australia's or 50 UK's worth of ice area that forms, then breaks up and melts each year.Reference www.coolantarrica.com
    • 02/04/2009
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  • More info

    The site of the 19th-century basilica is traditionally associated with the beheading of the city's patron, Saint Denis, in the 3rd century. According to legend, after he was martyred, Bishop Denis picked up his severed head and carried it several miles to the north where the city of Saint Denis stands today. The hill was later home to a large Benedictine abbey, which was destroyed at the French Revolution.After France's 1870 defeat by the Prussians in the Franco-Prussian War and its aftermath, the Commune of 1871, the basilica was planned as a guilt offering and a vote of confidence to cure France's misfortunes.The Basilique Sacré-Coeur was designed by the architect Paul Abadie in a Romanesque-Byzantine architectural style. Its foundation stone was laid in 1875. The basilica was not completed until 1914 and not officially opened for worship until 1919, after the end of the First World War.Reference: www.sacred-destinations.comThe triple-arched portico is surmounted by two bronze equestrian statues of France's national saints, Joan of Arc and King Saint Louis IX.
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  • More on India

    The subcontinent of India lies in south Asia, between Pakistan, China and Nepal. To the north it is bordered by the world's highest mountain chain, where foothill valleys cover the northernmost of the country's 26 states. Further south, plateaus, tropical rain forests and sandy deserts are bordered by palm fringed beaches .Side by side with the country's staggering topographical variations is its cultural diversity, the result of the coexistence of a number of religions as well as local tradition. Thus, the towering temples of south India, easily identifiable by their ornately sculptured surface, are associated with a great many crafts and performing arts of the region.In the desert of Kutch, Gujarat, on the other hand, a scattering of villages pit themselves against the awesome forces of nature, resulting in Spartan lifestyles made vibrant by a profusion of jewelry and ornamental embroidery used to adorn apparel and household linen. In the extreme north is the high altitude desert of Ladakh. Local culture is visibly shaped by the faith - Buddhism -as well as by the harsh terrain. Yet another facet of Indian culture is observed in the colorful tribal lifestyles of the north eastern states of Nagaland, Mizoram, Tripura and Manipur with their folk culture.In the central Indian states of Orissa and Madhya Pradesh tribal village life has resulted in a variety of artistically executed handicrafts.India's mountains provide heli skiing, river running, mountaineering and trekking. Its beaches provide lazy sun-bathing as well as wind surfing and snorkeling, and its jungles provide shooting wildlife -with a camera.India's history goes back to 3,200 BC when Hinduism was first founded. Buddhism, Jainism, Sikhism. Judaism. Zoroashtrianism, Christianity and Islam all exist within the country today. As a consequence of India's size, the history of the country has seldom been the same for two adjoining territories, and its great natural wealth has lured a succession of traders and foreign influences to it, each having left their imprint in the country, however faint or localized. Thus, Chinese fishing nets in Kerala are a throwback to that country's ancient maritime trade, while in the north, terra-cotta figurines of the centuries BC bear distinctly Greek traces.Modern India is home alike to the tribal with his anachronistic lifestyle and to the sophisticated urban jetsetter. It is a land where temple elephants exist amicably with the microchip. Its ancient monuments are the backdrop for the world's largest democracy where atomic energy is generated and industrial development has brought the country within the world's top ten nations. Today, fishermen along the country's coastline fashion simple fishing boats in a centuries old tradition while, a few miles away. motor vehicles glide off conveyor belts in state-of-the-art factoriesreference www.tourindia.com
    • 02/04/2009
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  • MORE ON Aberystwyth

    It is also home to the University of Wales Aberystwyth and the National Library.The town is nestled between three hills and two beaches, and hosts some castle ruins, a pier and a harbour. The surrounding hills hold the visible remains of a iron age fort and also a monument to Wellington and once climbed offer stunning views of Cardigan Bay.Aberystwyth is a University town with some seven thousand students, ensuring it a vibrant throughout the year and not just during summertime. Incidentally, there are now 'only' fifty pubs left in Aberystwyth!The seafront hosts Victorian / Edwardian buildings mostly 4/5 stories high. The wide promenade protect the buildings from the revenges of the Irish Sea and offers space to sit, soak up the sun and view the surrounding hills and mountains which in winter are often covered in snow. On a clear day you may see the tallest mountain in Wales, Snowdon.The harbour was once one of the busiest in Wales and is fed by the rivers Ystwyth and Rheidol (which incidentally, is the steepest river in Britain). Geographically, Aberystwyth may be considered isolated from the rest of Wales. However, this isolation made it necessary for the local people to look after themselves and over the years it has acquired more resources than a town of this size would normally have. It is now the centre of local rural life and is visited by many to sample the numerous cafés, bars, and restaurants including, Chinese, Indian, Italian and Mediterranean cuisine.The local weather is dominated by the sea and the Gulf Stream which warms the whole region and makes for pleasurable visiting.Reference http://www.aberystwyth.com/
    • 02/04/2009
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  • Strengths of each method

    The strengths of the quantitative paradigm are that its methods produce quantifiable, reliable data that are usually generalizable to some larger population. Quantitative measures are often most appropriate for conducting needs assessments or for evaluations comparing outcomes with baseline data.Qualitative research methodologies are designed to provide the researcher with the perspective of target audience members through immersion in a culture or situation and direct interaction with the people under study. Qualitative methods used in social marketing include observations, in-depth interviews and focus groups. These methods are designed to help researchers understand the meanings people assign to social phenomena and to elucidate the mental processes underlying behaviors. Hypotheses are generated during data collection and analysis, and measurement tends to be subjective. In the qualitative paradigm, the researcher becomes the instrument of data collection, and results may vary greatly depending upon who conducts the research.Reference: www.socialmarketing.com
    • 01/04/2009
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  • More on Methodologies

    Qualitative research methodologies are designed to provide the researcher with the perspective of target audience members through immersion in a culture or situation and direct interaction with the people under study. Qualitative methods used in social marketing include observations, in-depth interviews and focus groups. These methods are designed to help researchers understand the meanings people assign to social phenomena and to elucidate the mental processes underlying behaviors. Hypotheses are generated during data collection and analysis, and measurement tends to be subjective.Quantitative research uses methods adopted from the physical sciences that are designed to ensure objectivity, generalizability and reliability. These techniques cover the ways research participants are selected randomly from the study population in an unbiased manner, the standardized questionnaire or intervention they receive and the statistical methods used to test predetermined hypotheses regarding the relationships between specific variables. The researcher is considered external to the actual research, and results are expected to be replicable no matter who conducts the research.Reference: www.socialmarketing.com
    • 01/04/2009
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  • More on quantitative research

    Quantitative research uses methods adopted from the physical sciences that are designed to ensure objectivity, generalizability and reliability. These techniques cover the ways research participants are selected randomly from the study population in an unbiased manner, the standardized questionnaire or intervention they receive and the statistical methods used to test predetermined hypotheses regarding the relationships between specific variables. The researcher is considered external to the actual research, and results are expected to be replicable no matter who conducts the research.Reference: www.socialmarketing.com
    • 01/04/2009
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  • More on quantitative research

    The objective of quantitative research is to develop and employ mathematical models, theories and/or hypotheses pertaining to natural phenomena. The process of measurement is central to quantitative research because it provides the fundamental connection between empirical observation and mathematical expression of quantitative relationships.Quantitative research is widely used in both the natural sciences and social sciences, from physics and biology to sociology and journalism. It is also used as a way to research different aspects of education. The term quantitative research is most often used in the social sciences in contrast to qualitative research.
    • 01/04/2009
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  • More on Mesopotamia

    The word 'Mesopotamia' is in origin a Greek name (mesos `middle' and 'potamos' - 'river' so `land between the rivers'). 'Mesopotamia' translated from Old Persian Miyanrudan means "the fertile cresent". Aramaic name being Beth-Nahrain "House of Two Rivers") is a region of Southwest Asia.Mesopotamia was known as the land between two rivers, the Tigris to the north and the Euphrates to the south. Rains were seasonal in this area, which meant that the land flooded in the winter and spring and water was scarce at other times. Farming in the region depended on irrigation from the Tigris and Euphrates Rivers. In ancient times, many resources in Mesopotamia were scarce or absent, which stimulated trade within the region and beyond. Supported by lucrative trade with its neighbors, Mesopotamia grew to become a powerful empire.Source: http://www.crystalinks.com/mesopotamia.html
    • 06/02/2009
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  • More creation of Israel

    Following World War II, the British withdrew from their mandate of Palestine, and the UN partitioned the area into Arab and Jewish states, an arrangement rejected by the Arabs. Subsequently, the Israelis defeated the Arabs in a series of wars without ending the deep tensions between the two sides. The territories Israel occupied since the 1967 war are not included in the Israel country profile, unless otherwise noted. On 25 April 1982, Israel withdrew from the Sinai pursuant to the 1979 Israel-Egypt Peace Treaty. In keeping with the framework established at the Madrid Conference in October 1991, bilateral negotiations were conducted between Israel and Palestinian representatives and Syria to achieve a permanent settlement. Israel and Palestinian officials signed on 13 September 1993 a Declaration of Principles (also known as the "Oslo Accords") guiding an interim period of Palestinian self-rule. Outstanding territorial and other disputes with Jordan were resolved in the 26 October 1994 Israel-Jordan Treaty of Peace. In addition, on 25 May 2000, Israel withdrew unilaterally from southern Lebanon, which it had occupied since 1982. In April 2003, US President BUSH, working in conjunction with the EU, UN, and Russia - the "Quartet" - took the lead in laying out a roadmap to a final settlement of the conflict by 2005, based on reciprocal steps by the two parties leading to two states, Israel and a democratic Palestine. However, progress toward a permanent status agreement was undermined by Israeli-Palestinian violence between September 2003 and February 2005. An Israeli-Palestinian agreement reached at Sharm al-Sheikh in February 2005, along with an internally-brokered Palestinian ceasefire, significantly reduced the violence. In the summer of 2005, Israel unilaterally disengaged from the Gaza Strip, evacuating settlers and its military while retaining control over most points of entry into the Gaza Strip. The election of HAMAS in January 2006 to head the Palestinian Legislative Council froze relations between Israel and the Palestinian Authority (PA). Ehud OLMERT became prime minister in March 2006; he shelved plans to unilaterally evacuate from most of the West Bank following an Israeli military operation in Gaza in June-July 2006 and a 34-day conflict with Hizballah in Lebanon in June-August 2006. OLMERT in June 2007 resumed talks with the PA after HAMAS seized control of the Gaza Strip and PA President Mahmoud ABBAS formed a new government without HAMAS. OLMERT in September 2008 resigned in the wake of several corruption allegations, but remains prime minister until a new government is formed after the general election in February 2009.Source is CIA.GOV
    • 06/02/2009
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  • Another recipe from my family

    2 pounds skinless chicken breast1/4 cup vinegar1 tablespoon soy sauce1 garlicCouple of peppercornsCut chicken into serving pieces. Add vinegar to chicken in 4 quart saucepan. Add soy sauce and rest of ingredients. Do not stir chicken until it has started to boil. Cover and simmer chicken till cooked, approximately 30 to 45 minutes. Add water, if necessary. Remove chicken. Fry some garlic in butter. When browned, add chicken without liquid. Fry till browned. Add liquid and simmer for 5 to 10 minutes.Enjoy!
    • 06/02/2009
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  • More on comet definition

    Comets are small, fragile, irregularly shaped bodies composed of a mixture of non-volatile grains and frozen gases. They have highly elliptical orbits that bring them very close to the Sun and swing them deeply into space, often beyond the orbit of Pluto.Comet structures are diverse and very dynamic, but they all develop a surrounding cloud of diffuse material, called a coma, that usually grows in size and brightness as the comet approaches the Sun. Usually a small, bright nucleus (less than 10 km in diameter) is visible in the middle of the coma. The coma and the nucleus together constitute the head of the comet.Source: http://www.solarviews.com/eng/comet.htm
    • 05/02/2009
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  • The reform ferman

    The Reform Ferman can be considered as the draft of first Ottoman Constitution. Even the Sultan had accepted a power higher than himself.According to the ferman;-The Ottoman Government had guaranteed the safety of the lives and the properties of both Muslim and Non-Muslim subjects.-The taxes would have been regulated according to the annual incomes.-The military services of the Ottoman subjects were re-organised.-Executions without a court decision were strictly forbidden.-Everybody has gained a right for inheritance.-Bribery was forbidden.-Law was regarded as the superior of all powers.
    • 05/02/2009
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  • Benefits and side effects of nicotine replacement therapy

    Benefits:Reduces the severely of withdrawal symptomsReduces urges to smokeDelays weight gainReduces relapseDo not cause new dependence as the user is already dependant on nicotineSide effects:Gum - throat irritation, indigestion patch - skin irritationNasal spray - nose and throat irritationInhalator - throat irritationMicrotab - mouth and throat irritation
    • 04/02/2009
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  • How Doppler works?

    Doppler radar works by detecting the presence and location of an object by bouncing a radio wave off of it and detecting the time it takes for the signal to return. Using the time value, and a knowledge of the speed of the wave, the distance traveled can be determined. These radar waves are bounced off of moving objects. In the case of weather, these objects are raindrops, snowflakes or other forms of precipitation. Using the Doppler effect, the change in frequency of the returning wave, as compared to the frequency of the wave that was sent out, yeilds the direction and the speed that the object is moving (radially) away from or towards the detector source. This data is then electronically converted into pictures showing the location and intensity of precipitation.Source:http://www.angelfire.com/va/emspage/preengineering.html
    • 04/02/2009
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  • Discovery and distance...

    Comet Hale-Bopp was discovered on July 23, 1995 by Alan Hale and Thomas Bopp at a distance from the sun of about 7 AU with an apparent magnitude of 10.5, which is extremely bright for a comet at such a distance. This corresponds to a diameter of more than thousand kilometres should we see the bare nucleus, which is not the case since an extended coma has been detected, and is clearly visible in the above image. The actual size of the nucleus is difficult to determine because it is hidden within the coma. Another explanation for the unusual brightness might be that the comet experienced an outburst which increased its brightness by several magnitudes. Observations during the coming months will show whether the comet is fading or not.Extensive astrometric observations in the days after the discovery (more than 200 in 3 days) and a prediscovery identification by Rob McNaught on a UK-Schmidt plate taken in April 1993 allowed a rapid orbit determination.Source: http://www.astro.uu.se/planet/HaleBopp_eng.html
    • 04/02/2009
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  • More on adverse effects

    Steroid abuse can lead to serious, even irreversible health problems. Some of the most dangerous among them include liver damage, jaundice (yellowish pigmentation of skin, tissues, and body fluids), fluid retention, high blood pressure, increases in LDL (bad cholesterol), and decreases in HDL (good cholesterol). Other reported effects include renal failure, severe acne, and trembling. In addition, there are some gender- and age-specific adverse effects:For men—shrinking of the testicles, reduced sperm count, infertility, baldness, development of breasts, increased risk for prostate cancerFor women—growth of facial hair, male-pattern baldness, changes in or cessation of the menstrual cycle, enlargement of the clitoris, deepened voiceFor adolescents—stunted growth due to premature skeletal maturation and accelerated puberty changes; adolescents risk not reaching their expected height if they take AAS before the typical adolescent growth spurtIn addition, people who inject AAS run the added risk of contracting or transmitting HIV/AIDS or hepatitis, which causes serious damage to the liver.Source; http://www.nida.nih.gov/Infofacts/steroids.html
    • 04/02/2009
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  • Some more background on Drake and Drake Equation

    Drake was influenced by Otto Struve, one of the world's preeminent astrophysicists. Struve believed that there was mounting evidence that life could certainly exist on some other planets.Drake later went to NAVY and later on to Harvard graduate school to study astronomy.Drake Equation Formula is:N = N* fp ne fl fi fc fLThe formula focus on the factors which determine how many intelligent, communicating civilizations there are in our galaxy.Source; http://www.activemind.com/Mysterious/Topics/SETI/drake_equation.html
    • 04/02/2009
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  • Lewis Wickes Hine

    He had photographed the American people in the agony of social and economic change. Hine subsequently changed his photographic style dramatically, perhaps to conform to what he thought might appeal to Roy Stryker from Resettlement Administration
    • 04/02/2009
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  • To add more...

    The baroque art period was the time of the Scientific Revolution and Age of Absolutism. So a lot of art that has scientific subjects. Another characteristic of Baroque art is movement. A lot of twisting torsos, and not controlled poses like those of the Renaissance.Also characteristic of Baroque art is a lot of emotion. Renaissance art is really idealized and controlled - baroque art is dramatic and emotional.
    • 04/02/2009
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  • Miss Emily's attitude

    Miss Emily represents for someone who lives in the South and couldn't accept the real thing that the North takes over the South after Civil War. The plot of this story is mainly about Miss Emily's attitude. Miss Emily lives in the modern society but her attitude is about the past.
    • 04/02/2009
    • 11:20:27
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  • Duckworth Industries, Inc

    I believe this essay is missing some crucial data such as number of total employees, the motto of the owner regarding the incentive plans. Otherwise, well written...
    • 08/11/2008
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  • More advantages

    The essay spoke about the flexibility of working from anywhere and anytime however does not fully explain the advantages of working remotely.-minimize the time to commute-eliminate commuting expenses such as gas, car maintenance,etc.-less commuting means less pollution for the environment-reduction of office space and office expenses
    • 10/10/2008
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  • 2 common practices in the US for working capital

    There are 2 common practices in the US for working capital.#1 Taking advantage of the float by issuing checks instead of EFT's, Wire transfers or direct deposits.#2 Issuing checks only once a week or once a month hence; taking advantage of the expense booking in the accounting systems but not frequently issuing checks.
    • 10/10/2008
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  • Competitve Environment

    This is a well written essay with one weak section which is the competitve environment. Motorcycle Indusrty estimates, Harley's marketshare, Japanese competitiors and their dominance in the racing arena could have been analyzed a little more...Good job overall..
    • 09/10/2008
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  • Recommendation

    This is a nice essay but it could have been better with comparison to priceline's competitors. This way the readers could have seen priceline's advantages and disadvantages in the marketplace versus the competitors. In todays business environment it is all about the competitive advantage.
    • 09/10/2008
    • 10:38:29
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  • More scientific explanation to AIDS

    I liked this essay however I would be happier if I see an exact scientific definition such as:"AIDS is caused by a virus called HIV (human immunodeficiency virus). A healthy immune system includes special kinds of white bloods cells called B cells and T cells, and depends on a balance of certain kinds of T cells. "Helper" T cells assist B cells in fighting disease. "Suppressor" T cells call off the attack when the invading disease has been stopped. HIV apparently destroys the helper cells without affecting suppressor cells proportionately. When suppressor cells outnumber helper cells, the immune system fails."Retrieved fromhttp://www.nyc.gov/html/doh/html/ah/ahb1.shtml
    • 08/10/2008
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  • No source shown

    I like the facts about AIDS however no source was shown therefore I did a search on the internet and find out that most of the content is copied from http://www.nyc.gov/html/doh/html/ah/ahb1.shtml
    • 08/10/2008
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  • Dynegy Energy Corp and Bush's government relations with Enron

    i could not see this in the essay but Enron tried to merge with Dynegy , another energy company at one point. Maybe we would not find about Enron if the merger deal was a success.Let's not forget the highly media covered Bush's governments ties to Enron such as VP Dick Cheney.In the end thousand of Enron employees lost their 401k plans which was driven by the Enron stock.Speaking of financial firms lossesin the essay ; JP Morgan lost hundreds of million dollars in lines of credit. besides financials JP Morgan lost it's reputation as well.More can be found regarding JP Morgan's losses by following the link below:http://www.iht.com/articles/2002/03/30/menron_ed3_.php
    • 07/10/2008
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