This is absolutely wonderful! I love the style, the form, the imagery. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.
- 15/12/2002
- 19:03:25
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed this story! There was a lot of detail and description. I agree with deftones_punkstar in that you could organize the dialogue a bit, but otherwise, great story!
- 15/12/2002
- 18:56:47
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Jonus, I thought your essay was very well thought out and presented. You rasied some very good points and followed through on your arguments. Overall, you get 2 "Teeny" thumbs up!
- 06/12/2002
- 18:58:12
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.