The way you began the essay was very eye catching and the flow persisted until the very end. I could see you put allot of time into this essay and normally I dont rate other people's essays, but I just want you to know, yours was worth reading and rating with a smile :)
- 10/01/2005
- 17:53:24
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
THIS PAPER WAS EXTREMELY SHORT AND SHOULD HAVE BEEN MORE DETAILED SO A PERSON COULD GET A BETTER UNDERSTANDING ABOUT THE FRANZ JOSEPH GLACIER IN NEW ZEALAND AND THHE DISTANCE OF THE GLACIER FROM AUSTRALIA
- 17/03/2003
- 01:23:46
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Abortion is a very touching and sensitive subject and the way you described the pros and cons consisted of good support for both ends. It was kind of unique that you did not put your input of how you felt about abortion. Great job!
- 16/03/2003
- 22:56:22
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Abortion is a very touching and sensitive subject and the way you described the pros and cons consisted of good support for both ends. It was kind of unique that you did not put your input of how you felt about abortion.
- 16/03/2003
- 22:52:11
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This was a good short analysis about all my sons that gave me an idea of what the play was about, it helped me out...thanks
- 16/03/2003
- 22:47:22
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very well written. The introduction graps a reader's attention from the beginning until the end. Your writing style and wording is beautiful...keep up the great work!
- 16/03/2003
- 02:04:16
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I think this was a very well rounded essay with a great introduction, body, and conclusion.
- 16/03/2003
- 01:54:47
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This essay offered good information, but it was scattered in a way and broad. An in depth introduction of what you were going to talk about would have made this more interesting. You also could have expanded a little more on your information and not have been as broad
- 14/03/2003
- 17:27:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay is pretty good, however instead of putting Bejamin Franklin at one point and Ben at another and then Franklin throughout another part of the essay, I believe you should stick with one concrete name throughout this essay or just use "he."
- 14/03/2003
- 00:48:30
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.