User Details For: Rxar
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Great essay; however, I would remove the images. Apart from that, you've aquired wonderful sources.- 12/04/2008
- 15:19:20
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Although the majority of this essay was decent, you added a list in the middle of it. . . You should have integrated it into your text. Further, I felt your arguments were far too short. They had good ideas; however , you should expand on them. Further, although wikipedia is a good starting point for research, you need to have a more reliable source.- 12/04/2008
- 11:36:59
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.