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  • Excellent work

    For a grade 8 essay this is without a doubt very good and you deserve the A+. You have expressed your idea's very well and it is more than obvious that you understand the topic very well. However a word of advice when you do essay's in future (just to pick up more marks) try to stick with third person terms particularly in science based assessments as teachers are very pushy about it ( I saw you refer to second person terms occasionally e.g. you or your ). Furthermore try to narrow down and be as concise as possible this way you can add in more info and not seem like you are blabbing away. But besides that you have done an excellent job. Keep it up and I enjoyed reading this essay its helped me a lot in understanding Thermal conductivity and thermal insulators in a much more simpler way then going through other web sites.
    • 13/08/2009
    • 05:29:02
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  • Good stuff

    Your idea's are expressed very well and display much depth (with excellent support) as to the primary topic of Critical thinking. I enjoyed reading this essay and I hope you keep the essay's coming!
    • 12/08/2009
    • 05:04:42
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  • Needs improvement

    Your idea's can be grasped however it is too general and does not display enough depth for a Bachelor's essay. Additionally your sentence structures particularly introduction requires much work as to drawing in the reader. Your essay needs much more improvement.
    • 12/08/2009
    • 04:59:34
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  • Nice work

    A very concise detailed report that should display more depth as to what you are discussing but overall good work.
    • 06/08/2009
    • 05:26:32
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow awesome work

    Very well detailed essay with excellent support to go with your arguments.excellent and keep it up
    • 06/08/2009
    • 05:24:31
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  • Good work

    Well very detailed assignment evidently supported with comprehensive research. Its assignments like these that inspire people like me to Ace my assignments with the help of yours.Overall good work
    • 06/08/2009
    • 05:22:42
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  • Good work

    Nice work you've expressed your idea's very thoroughly evidently with comprehensive research.
    • 06/08/2009
    • 05:05:56
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  • Good work

    Essay's like this is what helps inspire people like me to do well in my assignments. Hope to see more of your work!
    • 06/08/2009
    • 04:56:22
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • An interesting essay

    Your idea's are expressed in a very direct manner which is good but you are very repetitive saying the words "Therefore, I believe..." Personally in essays you should try to avoid repeating yourself as well as avoid using first person terms. These terms are not viewed positively when teachers are marking work.
    • 06/08/2009
    • 04:53:28
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    A very well detailed essay in relation to cohabitating before marriage. Your idea's are expressed in a very direct manner which some of the essay's on this site lack.
    • 06/08/2009
    • 04:46:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome Essay

    Excellent work keep up the good work
    • 06/08/2009
    • 04:44:10
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  • Nice job

    All the info is there and well detailed except minor area's where your sentences seem to be very jumbled up and hard to read out. But besides that good work!
    • 11/03/2009
    • 05:31:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    Nice detailed report except some of your sentences seem to be very long and I run out of breathe when I try to read it lol (in my mind)[e.g first sentence of the conclusion]. Try adding comma's in within the sentences and shorten it down to smaller sentences and all should be good! *I had the same problems but you'll find when you write shorter sentences it will sound a lot better!
    • 11/03/2009
    • 05:28:26
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  • Good Work

    lol this is great work except I saw the exact assignment on google. I hope its your own work and if it is Good job and keep it coming!
    • 05/03/2009
    • 04:23:10
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  • Great!

    This is exactly what I need. All I need to do now is to adopt it ....
    • 24/02/2009
    • 01:23:43
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  • Nice Work

    Good info! Even though I haven't seen the actual painting its as if I can see it just by reading your work. Good Job !
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:19:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely detailed

    Though not as long as the other assignments yours is more concise about the topic and you don't waffle on. Good work and nice biblio!
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:13:16
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  • Good Work

    I've got nothing to say but good work and keep it coming!
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:12:02
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  • Too short

    You seem to cut off for no reason during the conversation. Not only this but you weren't clear about what the essay was about.
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:10:57
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    A very well detailed assignment but you seem to get a bit general in some area's of the essay but overall good work and nice biblio!
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:06:25
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  • Excellent Job

    Good Work you have exemplified all the prevalent idea's in a well fashioned manner.
    • 22/02/2009
    • 05:05:23
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  • Good Work

    Your essay has all the fine points in the book however you can touch it up by replacing some words with more "complicated" vocabulary. Overall good work!
    • 17/02/2009
    • 02:10:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • An interesting essay

    I've never found any essays that are both informative and funny on Cheathouse except till now. I don't know whether it is appropriate to mix a little humour into an essay because I didn't think it would pay off but looks like it did for you! Keep up the good work :)
    • 13/02/2009
    • 04:15:40
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  • An extraordinary essay

    Excellent work your essay has left me speechless and without a doubt aided me in my assignment of the meaning of life!
    • 12/02/2009
    • 03:34:14
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  • Great work

    Excellent essay except you seem to be missing a biblio. But overall good work and keep it up!
    • 11/02/2009
    • 02:30:42
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  • Good Work

    Your work has been very well sorted. It flows and sounds great. Good Work
    • 10/02/2009
    • 03:06:17
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  • Good Work

    The essay flows well and your arguments have been very well backed up. Your biblio has been set out nicely. Good Work
    • 10/02/2009
    • 03:00:57
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  • Nice Work

    The essay flows well and your opinions have been backed up very well. Good Work !!
    • 10/02/2009
    • 02:59:37
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  • Good Work

    Your arguments flow very well along with support. I have no more to say but good work.
    • 10/02/2009
    • 02:53:53
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    Very well detailed however generalised in some part of the essay. The wording and the choices of your words will allow your idea's to flow better and ergo give you a higher grade.
    • 04/02/2009
    • 02:20:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent essay

    Very well detailed essay and correctly set out bibliography.
    • 04/02/2009
    • 02:16:12
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  • Very well done

    Very well detailed essay and correctly set out bibliography. All in All an A grade assignment!
    • 04/02/2009
    • 02:00:35
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  • A captivating essay

    Very well detailed and most of all very well worded. You might need to add some dates of when you used your sources. But besides that excellent essay!
    • 04/02/2009
    • 01:58:54
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  • Excellent essay

    Very good choices of words to allow one to envision your experiences on a ship.
    • 04/02/2009
    • 01:54:03
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  • Good Work

    Very well detailed essay and properly set out biblio. The essay is although a bit generalised in some parts. Try not to use "You" or any second or first person language. But all in all good work!
    • 04/02/2009
    • 01:46:55
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  • Good Work

    Very well detailed and correctly set bibliography. Keep up the good work!
    • 04/02/2009
    • 01:32:50
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  • Wow I am pretty speechless

    Very well done. I too am a Chess enthusiast and I really like the way you have incorporated your opinions regarding Chess as beneficial for society through such an indirect way seeing as how it is supposed to be written in third person. " Even the author of this paper, who is also a chess enthusiast, is not excluded from this trend of World Champion studying." Absolute genius. Excellent essay!
    • 22/11/2008
    • 23:37:43
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  • Good Work

    A very detailed report on what foods to eat and how they influence the body. Just one important part is missing. Your bibliography. You could also have elaborated further on some of deficiencies when lacking certain food types but overall good work
    • 18/11/2008
    • 01:51:12
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  • Good Work

    This was a prac report as I can see where you placed in your method. I believe that perhaps should have wrote in third person for the first part because well its a science prac report. It was interesting how you included a historical note which really makes sense as you can link that back to your findings. Overall I think you've done good.
    • 18/11/2008
    • 01:47:24
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmmm

    Not that great mainly due to the fact that you have briefly detailed what Vitamin C is and therefore couldn't link it back properly to the experiment you conducted. You also have some grammar mistakes that should be fixed.
    • 18/11/2008
    • 01:44:18
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  • Good Work

    It seems to be a little too general in some areas of information perhaps you could elaborate more. You essay also needs a conclusion as rockrock pointed out.
    • 03/11/2008
    • 23:02:38
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  • Great Work

    Perhaps not as good as the original but nevertheless a successful adaption of Atticus Finches speech. There are some minor spelling grammar here and there but overall good work.
    • 02/11/2008
    • 00:57:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • You have the right idea's but poor grammar

    Your ideas are strong and remain to the plot of the story however you have made many grammar mistakes I would highly recommend you recheck your work or at least use F7 (Spelling and Grammar). But overall you have good ideas.
    • 30/10/2008
    • 01:48:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    This is an excellent summary of the plot for the book. Very helpful for those who find it very hard to read the book. Good Work mate
    • 20/10/2008
    • 20:21:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Strong Idea's

    You have done well in backing up all your idea's with quotes from the bible and your bibliography seems perfectly fine. Your idea's are obviously very strong and as a result the structure of your essay is very good. I nothing more to say but Good work and keep it up!
    • 16/10/2008
    • 21:52:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    You have all the essential area's in the book. This is very good for people who find the book not entertaining (boring) and understand the plot of the book.
    • 14/10/2008
    • 21:14:01
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay but needs improving

    I'm sorry but I highly doubt that this was written by an undergraduate student and received an A for it. Why? Because the words in some area's of your paragraph are very general you could have chosen more accurate and discriminate words. Furthermore you could have included more sophisticated words to make the essay sound much better. But besides that the idea's are essentially correct.
    • 14/10/2008
    • 21:01:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    You have a detailed analysis and there is no flaws I can see. Good work you deserve the A!
    • 07/10/2008
    • 00:36:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay but needs improving

    You have obviously placed good work into this but there is some grammar work example :"Then after she has married Romeo the Nurse" you don't need the then. Also it should be noted that you can connect some sentences to form better ones as in some areas (not many) you seem like your making short notes.
    • 30/09/2008
    • 21:16:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent Work

    I am perfectly speechless to your essay. You have as stated before analysed the following context with a deep analysis and would not surprise me if you got an A+++. Keep up the excellent work your essays are one of the best in this whole database!!!
    • 16/09/2008
    • 03:22:25
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  • Good Job

    You have explained and analysed the basic concepts of the movie however as stated before you are missing many elements in the movie for a deep analysis this includes the constant recurrence of the holy cross and the repeated uses of water which symbolises for purity and purifying of the soul which is associated with baptism. So you could say Religion is one of the important themes in Baz Lurhmanns version of Romeo and Juliet. Overall Good Job Keep up the good work!!!!
    • 16/09/2008
    • 03:17:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    Perhaps you should write in third person as it sounds more professional and unbiased however besides that your on a roll keep up the good work!
    • 12/09/2008
    • 02:08:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    This is excellent work, I couldn't find a flaw in your essay. You have discussed in a very deep detail the important and key aspects of Baz Lurhmanns film techniques used throughout the movie (scenery and language and props e.t.c). I rate this 10/10 one of the best essays I have seen in Cheathouse. Again good job!!!
    • 11/09/2008
    • 01:49:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent Work

    You have swayed my opinions on Sweatshops and I can now safely assure myself that Sweatshop can have a positive influence. Though perhaps you should write in third person rather then first. Maybe your essay required you to wirte in first and if it did then your essay is perfect ! I rate it 10/10
    • 23/08/2008
    • 18:08:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    You have created an excellent scene of sweatshops at the beginning of your paragraph and have exemplified the crucial points of the essay. Although the essay was a bit short
    • 23/08/2008
    • 17:51:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    You need to write your essay with a unbiased opion but overall it was okay
    • 17/08/2008
    • 21:41:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    Good Work you deserve that A. Great analysis onto Bruce Dawes poems though I have never been good at analyzing poetry.
    • 07/08/2008
    • 23:29:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    It is evident that you have placed much time writing this essay and the outcome of the assessment would probably be a B+ or A- or A standard but overall I was emotionally touched.
    • 07/08/2008
    • 00:04:24
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Absolutely incredible essay

    I can't find anything wrong with this essay. Excellent work and good bibliography. I give you 10/10
    • 24/07/2008
    • 00:15:45
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Finished Essay?

    The arguments you pose are far too brief and additionally wikipedia is not a reliable source too use.
    • 21/07/2008
    • 23:43:31
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    Overall the research which has been undertaken is excellent however there some area's where it is weak and maybe you should elaborate on more. But overall good work mate.
    • 17/06/2008
    • 01:43:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • A perfect essay

    A perfect essay with no flaws at all. You should have gotten a higher mark.
    • 17/06/2008
    • 00:06:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work

    You've addressed the topic and supported your arguments with good evidence. But you need your reference/bibliography. But overall good work mate.
    • 16/06/2008
    • 23:24:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Undergraduate?

    Are you sure this is at the level of a college undergraduate. Anyway you haven't got a wide variety of vocabulary in this assessment and additionally you haven't got a bibliography (unless you forgot to add it in, which is a very common mistake)It'll also be helpful by sticking to a basic sentence structure for essays. Apart from that you seem to have done alot of thinking into this assessment.
    • 11/06/2008
    • 00:09:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Work

    The essay is well written, althiugh you may some grammar mistakes (which can be easily fixed) your also missing the bibliography/reference but besides that your all good!
    • 10/06/2008
    • 23:40:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job

    Extremely informative and after reading this I have clear understanding of the Pacific War however you're missing an important part in this essay, the bibliography. Make sure you reference your essay or you might be accused of plagiarisms which I highly doubt. But overall 10/10 for the essay!
    • 05/06/2008
    • 23:38:27
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  • Good Work - Needs Extending

    The work you've done already is good.(I lied I meant very good) You just need to extend the amount of words by a lot.
    • 05/06/2008
    • 02:01:53
    • Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.