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  • Nice work

    This spinoff is very good, but another look over could show that there are some uses of different tenses eg. using "have" instead of "had". Other than that i would rate this 9/10.
    • 05/06/2008
    • 01:17:31
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  • Nice work on this

    Overall I have liked the essay, but I also believe that you could have cut down a bit on the quotes. The quotes were done well, but (to me) it seemed that there was little writing compared to a lot of quotes, and some quotes could have been expanded, to extend their meaning.
    • 05/06/2008
    • 01:08:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.