A mad man such as Hitler may not have came into power if not for the Germans humiliation at Versailles and the devastation of the Great Depression, though possibly another might view Hitler's aggression as being his nature, and the ambition for World power was always the aim, even before the events of Versailles. Therefore, to assess upon any extent to Germany's part in WWII would be greatly subjective. Second problem is that you don't have bibliography. The author of your story is probably Bullock since he wrote initially after the events of WWII and wrote the largest collection of the causes of WWII. Bullock's theory was written soon after WWII, and after an allied victory, it would be unlikely that the American historian, Bullock, would blame the allies for their contribution in War.Therefore you can never argue with his topic, given the extreme subjective view.You can acheive the more objective view when you have essays which "assess the role of Appeasement or failure of the League of Nations in causing WWII"
- 07/07/2008
- 07:23:59
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Very well presented set of argument, analysis, you have clearly shown your skills in debate and backing your statements with firm analysis. You argued that their were long term and short term crisis which had led to the war, and that Germany wasn't the only blame for it.Your arguments against Germany for causing the war was mainly to blame Britain, France and Russia in their actions in the Treaty of Versailles, Appeasement, League of Nations (Geneva Disarmament Conference) while on the hand, Hitler's aggressive fascists Germany proved extremely gruesome as shown with their attack on Poland and intimidating stance when joined with powerful states such as Italy and Japan. WWII was almost inevitable and the events of the Wall Street crash in 1929 wasn't helpful either in stopping the bloody events that followed.Well-composed essay9/10
- 02/07/2008
- 06:04:31
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A pretty good assessment, though quite informally written.Though I do believe that you have established your main weaknesses in the your last sentence, in your conclusion. "my argument and the facts show, Hitler was not the only cause of WWII; it is clear that it was not ENTIRELY Hitler that was to blame for the war; more specifically it was his extremist love for his people, his yearning for power and the idleness of strong countries to intervene with his actions," this sentence is extremely contradicting. Personally, I believe Hitlers urge to become World power was more associated with 'historical loss', this debate being supported by F. McDonough in "The Origins of the First and Second World Wars." Throughout this article, McDonough claims Hitler's ambition to become World power after being 'spat' on in the previous War. Of course, other factors such as appeasement and the Treaty of Versailles seemed to be a definite provocative move on the Triple Alliances behalf (as confirmed in this article), though the major reason for Hitler's ambitions was the want for Germany to become World power, the infliction of pain from constant loans, economic abuse and an 'over-fined' Germany was the main reason for Hitler to stand up against this loss and begin a new era for Germany.The constant repetition of an opening sentence bores a reader;The Rearmament of Germany should have caused the warThe Remilitarization of the Rhineland should have caused warThe Rome-Berlin Axis should have caused the warEtc etc etc……this essay structure is extremely 'child-like', please consider writing in a more professional or orderly fasion.Nevertheless, you have come to a great effort with your assessment and shown various causes of WWII.A fine effort indeed :)
- 02/07/2008
- 00:33:05
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You commented on how WW1 had indirectly contributed to the causing of WW2, though you've never stated the unfinished business….What were the problems unsolved? How did this provoke Germany? Whether your statement is truthful or false, "In some respect World War One was also an indirect cause of the Second World War because it did not succeed in solving the problems that had caused it and many people regarded World War One and World War two as World War Part One and Part Two," you definitely need to justify your statements.Another loosely tied statement regards Mussolini's want to deal with Fascism and his opposition Anthony Eden, whom most would have no idea who he was (you need to give more info)Nonetheless, I agree with your points on the unfortunate deaths and assassinations of important political members of the German headquarters. Their deaths had removed Germany's political standings as a nation embodied with peaceful negotiations but rather those which provoked other nations such as a France and Britain into War. The growth of Nazi Germany and under the command of Hitler as we can see from this essay proves to be one of the major factors that cause this war.A well argued and fairly written essay though I am quite utterly confused with your last sentence, "Because World War Two was caused by the combination of all these causes and we don't know what would have happened if one of the precipitants had not occurred." I think you were trying to say that since we couldn't reverse history and examined each individual war-cause and measured it's level of significance, and tested it like a science experiment where one variable would be tested at a time.Further analysis and understanding of the text would perfect it..good effort
- 01/07/2008
- 23:56:32
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your essay contains fairly good ideas and reasons why Japan attacked pearl harbor. though i believe that your essay structure needs attention. you paragraphs aren't structured with enough reasoning, poor grammar in some parts and no conclusion. i rarely see this as a final essay.
- 01/07/2008
- 18:47:51
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great examples...great ideas that reflect upon who Brecht was and what were his intentions...your explanations expand to a great detail..good effort
- 30/06/2008
- 01:01:29
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i like your explanations of the metaphors..good job buddy
- 29/06/2008
- 02:15:18
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yer..drugz nd musik..how true..awesome essay bro
- 28/06/2008
- 04:28:04
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i think this essay is still very good..just because its and formal and in an essay format i think the ideas r extremely good...anyways...if u put it in essay format..pplz will most likely copy it
- 28/06/2008
- 04:27:22
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i luv dis essay...very catchy title by the way..pplz...rate dis essay coz its damn gud
- 28/06/2008
- 04:24:53
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i like ur ideas...i would never of thot of dat myself
- 28/06/2008
- 04:23:51
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very well done..great insight into this topic
- 28/06/2008
- 04:22:12
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very interesting...i would like to no more tho..lol...plzz write more
- 28/06/2008
- 04:21:30
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this stuff has really helped me with my assignments..I'm studying drama right now..learning bout modern theater and the different practitioners...dis essays has really helped me...thanks buddy
- 28/06/2008
- 04:17:23
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I've got a drama assignment and I'm doing modern theater....after reading this essay..its def helped me a lot with my understanding of Brecht..awesome mate
- 28/06/2008
- 04:16:14
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wonderful stuff...u ve explored the needs for our society to acknowledge our bodies and especially the period when we need to no more about it...great essay
- 28/06/2008
- 04:14:53
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American culture, Asian culture, etc....yes..yes...every culture has der own opinions in sex and sexuality...diseases r pretty common in states such as the US....totally agree wif u mate....nice work
- 28/06/2008
- 04:13:35
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You're very true in this sense...Tasmanians in Australia tend to drell upon this subject quite often....such as pplz living in small towns and whom are isolated from everybody else.....the common inbreds in our society should be seen as a problem nd we need solutions to overcome this...great essay
- 28/06/2008
- 04:12:08
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i didn't find that funny like u other pplz....i thot dis writer was extremely srsly..expressed in a srs way nd was extremely truthful in his words..yes..sex can be expressed humorously but the concept of AIDS and other sexual transmitted diseases in our society are becoming more and more overwhelming...we need to overcome this problem...but otherwise an excellent piece..nice work buddy :)
- 28/06/2008
- 04:10:07
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dis is the stuff I'm into..lol..jokes..but its very good..i see you've put a lot of effort into it...loooolll
- 28/06/2008
- 04:07:11
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.....its just missing out...need to maybe expand on ur body and argument...but ur ideas are okay
- 28/06/2008
- 04:05:02
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you've been on the pending list for ages and you have got way better ratings than me...but how come you're still on the pending list?
- 28/06/2008
- 04:04:10
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dis essay is awesome!!! thanks for the sources..helped me a lot with my essay
- 28/06/2008
- 03:52:59
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this essay truly depicts the rightfulness towards our sexuality....i think it really depends on the girl....if your the girl who wants attention..then yer...she ll probably want the sex and brag it with her friends...if its just an urge than i guess your like everyone..its just the hormones taking place
- 23/06/2008
- 17:40:50
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i don't understand where you are getting at...i believe that masturbation is extremely safe and although it is against religious practices of the Christian faith...i believe it is totally safe, no disease what so ever
- 23/06/2008
- 17:36:23
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I thought that this essay had given me the right to have sex with a condom but no!! this essay has taught me to understand that sex with a condom isn't the only right thing to do...we need to practice sex safely and ensure that we are only having sex with our real loving partner..often at times someone will get hurt and a condom will come to blame...never trust the condom alone!!great essay
- 23/06/2008
- 17:33:06
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Your essay is very well written. i like your points about Macbeths tragedy not only being brought upon by his own ambition and lust for power but also a downfall which had resulted from the witches evilness and Lady Macbeths will to become queen. i still think you could have explored more of the other factors
- 23/06/2008
- 17:29:32
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Definitely very well written...stated most of the causes of ww2...you should also argue to what extent though. nonetheless you've given a great set of summary and study notes
- 23/06/2008
- 00:45:05
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nice work..you have covered both views in your essay..
- 22/06/2008
- 23:22:55
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