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Is 'Lord of the Flies' by William Golding a completely pessimistic novel?
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Discuss the ideas of changing values and the human condition in relation to 'Romeo and Juliet' by William Shakespeare and 'The Sunne Rising' by John Donne.
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Is Junger's film 'Ten Things I hate About You' an unsuccessful transformation of Shakespeare's play 'The Taming of The Shrew'?
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The 'War of Currents'
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Apple Trees
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Changing Government Policies Concerning Aboriginal Peoples
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How is Patriarchal and Gender Power shown in Shakespeare's 'The Tempest'?
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How the idea of 'Changing Worlds' is evident in Peter Weir's film 'The Truman Show', Miroslav Holub's poem 'The Door' and John Marsden's novel 'Winter'.
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What Aldous Huxley's 'Brave New World' and Anthony Burgess' 'A Clockwork Orange' say about the possibility of a Utopia, and how they utilise conventions of the Utopian genre.
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How my understanding of "Searching for Identity" has been shaped by Tim Winton's short stories 'Abbreviation' and 'Damaged Goods', and by the novel 'Maestro' by Peter Goldsworthy.
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Just a few things...
"Obviously, one, young Fortinbras, is a fighter, and one, young Hamlet, is a scholar." - perhaps replace with ", because of the contrast between scholar and fighter." and omit the next sentence.Put brackets around "Act 4 Scene 5 lines 149-154 "Change "Consequently, Hamlet consumed with rage automatically..." to "Consequently, Hamlet is consumed with rage and automatically..."Change "Even though they seem very similar, the differences are also there which could make them adversaries." to perhaps something like "However, their dissimilarities are present enough to turn them into adversaries."Apart from that, it's quite good ^^- 11/08/2009
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Lovely! But...
Perhaps place your definition of a 'genius' at the beginning of the essay? 'cause throughout reading your essay, I found myself often wondering "so...what is a genius?"- 11/08/2009
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