It is a short a nice summary of Jane Eyre however you should give insights and a bit of analysis of what the story holds. This gives the first time reader of Jane Eyre a fundamental foundation of the book. Great summary though!
- 21/01/2010
- 07:08:21
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Not bad.. More personal insights would help
- 22/11/2009
- 07:15:56
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Nice control of the words. Very informative and I totally agree. You should compare Canada and the United States' DUI statistics and improve the essay about a solution to raise or lower the age limit for drinkingjust to help:)
- 15/04/2009
- 12:35:57
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You did not have many supporting evidence. Yes, you were on the right track and also had an interesting idea, but lacked the solid rock to keep it standing. The essay is very repetitive and could've had a better control of language.
- 15/04/2009
- 12:29:32
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You had a nice control of language. You seem to know what you are talking about. Horay for your patriotism and human rights!!
- 15/04/2009
- 12:18:09
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