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  • Confused

    I am not quite sure whether this is a fictional story, or a real life experience you were asked to write, it is suggested that you are well beyond the schooling age, why would you submit it if you are 33+ ?
    • 23/01/2003
    • 11:56:17
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Appears to be a good paper, seems a little short. An interesting point about "Lennie killing things start out as something small, like the mice, and later progresses to the puppy, then finally ends with killing Curly's wife".Insanity grows, and someone has to stop it... HAHAHAHAHAWHAHAWHAHAHABAHAABHAAHHAA!!!!(j/k - I am fine)
    • 19/01/2003
    • 00:02:46
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Trans

    Vietnamkrieg(Indochinakrieg)- conflict in Indochina of 1946-1975- origin and Hauptschauplatzn were Viet Nam- divides into three phases1. Phase (1946 54)- it fought an expedition army of the Frenchmen against a Partisanenarmee(Vietminh) under Vo Nguyen Giap- expedition army should Indochina again to franz. Colony make- beginning of war to 23. 111946(bombardment of the port Haiphong through franz. Warships)- attack of the vietnamnesischen units in December. on franz. Garrison- 1949: ehem. Emperor Bao Dai becomes formal the "head of state" (appointed of the Frenchmen)- 1949: Gtruendung of the communist VR China > military u. economical assistance for Vietminh- 1950: The USA send military advisers to Saigon (politics of the containment)- 7. 5.1954: Battle with serve Bien Phu > final defeat franz. Troops- 26. 4 27. 7.1954: Geneva Indochinakonferenz- Ergebnissse: - Armistice in Indochina- - Laos, Kambodscha and Viet Nam separate out staatl. Connection- - Viet Nam is divided into north and south Viet Nam- elections for reunification failed to the USA- 1954: Ngo Dinh Diem becomes in suedl. Part the head of the government appointed > the Frenchmen from the country "drive out"- south Viet Nam built itself to an anti communist Vorposten out (300000 men army)- 1957: increasing Guerilliaaktivitaeten of Vietcong- 1960: - Vietcong brought larger laendl. Areas under control- - Vietcong controls the liberation front of south Viet Nam (FNL)- J. F. Kennedy strengthens Militaerpresents- 2. and 4. 8. 1964: Tonking incident (bombardment of 2 amerik. Destroyers through nordvietn. War ships)- L. B. Johnson: - Requesting the full power of attorney for employment amerik. Troops in Indochina2. Phase (1965 1973)- systematic bombardment of economic and military goals in North Vietnam (starting from 1965)- air raids on the road system in Laos and Kambodscha- participation of allied States of (south Korea, Thailand, Australia, New Zealand, the Philippines)- Bombardements should extract the life maintenance from Vietcong- North Vietnam was economical dependent on the Vr China and the USSR, as also militarily- Tet offensive of Vo Nguyen Giaps troops (end of Jan` 68) unsuccessfully- > shock in the USA (due to the impact force of Vietcong)- world-wide criticism of US American Viet Nam politics > attitude of the Bombardements > most important condition for the admission of the negotiations put- 27. 1.1973: Truce- results: - Total deduction of the American personnel from Viet Nam- - elections into south Viet Nam (did not come to conditions)3. Phase (1973 1976)- Saigoner government tried to extend Gebite- no finance. Assistance and case militar. Bases in the high country of Annan in March 1975- > retreat of the suedvietnamnesischen troops > dissolution of these with to strong pressure of the advancing nordvietnamnesischen troops- 21. 4.1975: Resignation of the suedvietnamnesischen Prasidenten Nguyen Van Thien- 30. 4.1975: Saigon by "Provisor. Revolutionary government "the FNL occupies > large Fluechtlingsanstrom- 2. 7.1976: production of the gesamtvietnamnesischen state under communist guidance
    • 14/01/2003
    • 19:16:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Time Life

    Is this a timeline or what? Let me guess you got it all from the book... :|
    • 14/01/2003
    • 19:09:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well-written

    This is a well-written historical essay; it discusses the disputes and controversies of the different Asian parties of the 1920s (mainly KMT and CCP).
    • 14/01/2003
    • 18:26:56
    • Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Re: ok if you are Jesus freak, else...

    Music IS Art
    • 12/01/2003
    • 18:44:55
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Poor Word Choice

    "The stable buck is a Negro"
    • 12/01/2003
    • 16:01:23
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Answers are not an ESSAY

    In my opinion people submit crap, this is not an essay, these are answers to questions that we don't even know.
    • 12/01/2003
    • 15:57:43
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • EMU

    Long, many sources, sounds great to me
    • 12/01/2003
    • 15:52:17
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good points

    A very interesting essay to read. Good points were raised, such as the overthrow of the Czar, so is it justifiable?(rhetorical question)
    • 08/01/2003
    • 21:55:36
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Revision Required

    I am not sure what grade this short-essay was written for, but I certainly can say that it need to be revised, "write thing ton" clearly should be changed to "right thing to". The figures seem offset as well, how positive are you that nearly 1.9 million of women were treated in only 8 years(1967-1975)?
    • 08/01/2003
    • 21:39:31
    • Score: 10 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    A well written essay, unlike a few I have noticed in the past
    • 08/01/2003
    • 21:29:33
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Not as good as the mark says

    This essay appears to be of a good quality, yet, it seems to be written in a rather simplified manner. Additionaly this essay contains rather harsh words such as "anti-American Communist bastard", moreover the sentences sometimes seem very short and under-developed, "Mr. Thomas, the owner, truly values his house. He was also nice to the children. The gang met in his house while he was on a brief trip." as if a 7 year-old re-telling the events that took place in the day to his mother.
    • 06/01/2003
    • 21:36:55
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.