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Illegal Immigration into America
- 2252 words (9 pages)
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The Harms of Affirmative Action
- 1599 words (6 pages)
- 41
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Good essay
Good writing skills. Pretty good structure... good attention getterBut needs a better thesis... more information in paragraphs .. and a stronger conclusionbut overall a good essay- 22/12/2008
- 06:24:23
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Good essay
Good: topic sentences and lots of informationnegative: Intro to long... weak attention getter.... thesis should be at the end describing what your whole essay will be based off of... little stronger conclusionbut overall good essay- 22/12/2008
- 06:19:38
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