well i would have hoped to see some negatives about both parties. all that is mentioned are things that make us proud to be Americans, but there are mistakes we should face and accept. Watergate, Heroshima, Iraq... we are all proud of the American dream, but we should be as honest as possible in our assessments.last, i am not politically active but if it came between a party that favors the working man and that that favors the business man, well my vote is settled.thank you
- 29/10/2008
- 03:47:49
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i think the article is fairly gradedit is just badly titledi thought i was going to see more stat. graphs, research...what i saw was a person citing a painful experience and building upon itthe information given about "alcoholism" it self was common knowledge in most parts.the personal part was movinga better title would have been "Alcoholism, a personal experience"but all in all a good job
- 28/10/2008
- 23:34:21
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I thought it was a well done essayGood arrangement of ideasStraight to the pointI might have wanted to see the writer's personal side appear moreWhere did he/she see him/her self belong?What factors most contributed for them considering themselves as part of that group?But it was a very good reading indeed
- 28/10/2008
- 23:19:58
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