I think that this essay would be very useful to those that smoke. Because it told you various ways of how to quit smoking. To me, I believe that smoking is like a disease, it keeps spreading. Therefore I believe that people should not smoke, because what advantages are there to smoking...none. So far in my life I have never heard of any good reason of why to smoke. But of course their are a lot of disadvantages to smoking. So why smoke?
- 01/05/2003
- 20:08:12
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was great, I thought they did a very good job in anyalizing advertisments. I also believe the point were the writer said they give no evidence, because that is so very much true. Many people in business's don't really care if there product helps anyone, all they want is the profit. So they usually tend to do whatever it takes to sell there product.
- 18/02/2003
- 21:17:40
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay was just a little strange, seeing as it wasn't even finished. Also the grammar needs some work.
- 23/01/2003
- 20:35:14
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I thought that this essay was ok. The writer gave good examples that supported the topic, and also gave good statements of what he/she believed. But on the other hand I didn't like that in the second paragraph the writer listed way too many or's in ONE sentance! And also the author kept talking about "her" and "she", who is this person?
- 07/01/2003
- 19:36:51
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.