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  • Comment for essay: Finding life through "Grandma"

    This essay tells a sad story of aging and how the body deteriorates, in many cases, whether the mind wants it to or not. I am surprised, though, that hotdot has made some of the errors that are obvious in this essay, because it was written for a Bachelor's level college course. Perhaps he or she should check into getting grammar checking software for essays. I use Microsoft Word 2007, part of The Ultimate Steal package I purchased last year through a promotion for college students, with grammar settings aligned with the requirements of the university that I attend, and it works out quite well! Discounting the basic errors, this is a decent essay with a significant amount of thought put into the writing, so it gets the "thumbs up."
    • 08/04/2009
    • 18:30:07
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  • Comment for essay: The Impact of Diversity and Demographic Characteristics on Individual Behavior

    This essay is well written and easy to understand. Not only does this essay explorer the effects of diversity on one's behavior, but it also slips into the underlying psychological effects that lead to such behavior. I would have liked to have seen a more in-depth analysis of the psychological aspects and ramifications of diversity. Overall, though, this is an excellent essay. I wish the system would allow for authors to input such information as what type of degree they wrote the essays for (more specific than just Bachelor's, like B.A or B.S.) and what type of program the author wrote it for, such as degree program for social science or for psychology, etc. At any rate, excellent job Winstema!
    • 08/04/2009
    • 18:11:35
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.