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  • Excellent

    I think you have written a very good essay. your thesis should is clear and your points are provided in the introduction. I didn't find any grammar mistakes. However you could have worked on the intro a bit more.
    • 19/12/2008
    • 23:37:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Amazing, organized and very good points

    your essay is very good written you have many good point specially the conclusion where you talk about teacher being responsible and knowing the legal actions and etc. Also you have organized this essay very well.
    • 19/12/2008
    • 23:11:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.