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Very Concerned Thoughts
Strong ideas/opinions are likely to be easy enough for everyone to take in when being clearly explained. In my opinion, this writing has enough to draw the readers' most serious attention.Even though, what this writing mainly tells is especially controversial. As the author has lined out and somehow implied that any opposing idea may be severely criticized, I do expect more persuasive and "safe" supporting material of this argumentative writing.@to the author (if possible): I grow up in Vietnam and have been seeing all the government's reforms with the eyes of a citizen. I think, I may be able to understand a bit of your personal feelings.- 15/01/2009
- 04:53:16
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Above Average
I have not read any of the books or papers you used in preparing this essay, but I think the only considerable problem I could find is the age of the studies & researches. Academics may have their knowledge to evaluate the availability of these researches' results, but the major, common people who benefit the most from these studies may think they are somehow "old".This is just a comment about a part of the content. I had a good reading with your essay and I think whoever delivered the essay up here has done much more than the work of summing up and re-writing ideas and to me that was good enough.I'll be waiting for your next pieces.Good day.- 13/01/2009
- 15:23:31
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