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  • Break down thoughts

    this is really good, but it lacks structure.
    • 23/01/2009
    • 09:44:56
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  • Good Job

    Nice supporting details, however, you can still build up the essay. Instead of focusing on religion perspectives, you can focus on cultural background. Anyways,nicely written.
    • 22/01/2009
    • 11:28:12
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