Good idea. But as an editorial note: watch your tenses.
- 28/01/2009
- 06:56:45
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This essay was very entertaining and informative. The structure is easy to follow. Nice job!
- 28/01/2009
- 06:51:00
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I thought that this was well done and highly informative, but your personal biases obstructed a complete analysis of their culture.
- 28/01/2009
- 06:45:26
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I felt that the writing in your essay was a bit choppy, but nonetheless I found the story to be engaging and enlightening. Keep up the good work.
- 28/01/2009
- 04:55:00
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This was very informative! It is definitely easy to follow due to its seamless construction. Excellent essay.
- 27/01/2009
- 19:20:18
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