Not much eles to say I think this person should have gotten an A instead of a B but teachers gradings are up to them.
- 09/02/2005
- 17:31:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These are the types of essays this site needs more of. Nothing really ground breaking in the way of differnet information but still its unique.
- 09/02/2005
- 17:27:47
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have no idea who wants to know wo much about the inarards of ATM mechines and what class would ask you to write such a detailed paper about ATM's.
- 09/02/2005
- 17:25:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Imagery is a literary technique that is allways asked to be identified when anylising a book. This essay does a great job explaining what imagery is.
- 09/02/2005
- 16:57:18
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This persons view might hold true if you are reading 6th or 8th grade history books but any high school student can tell you about the "Trail of Tears" or Great depression. I my self would not want to be taught about the many massacers and killings that the US has taken part in at the age of 10. I think if you want to know all the facts you can always reseach it yourself.
- 09/02/2005
- 16:54:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The paper seems to be directly out of an alminac I dont know how you could get an A for this paper.
- 09/02/2005
- 16:48:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Sorry to say this but this kids writing is like at a 5th grade level. A person in 11th grade should not have to start a paragraph with "I will no explain..." it just makes the whole paper seem weak.
- 13/05/2004
- 19:26:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.