The text states:'While the postwar U.S. leaders still believed bombers were better suited to their needs, the Soviets continued to develop rockets and ballistic missiles.'That is untrue. With assistance of German scientists like Werner von Braun, the USA used the basis of the German V-2 rockets to develop the 'redstone' rockets in the 1950's. Then they went on to develop the 'jupiter rocket', which launched the first American satellite into space in 1958 (jupiter c rocket).
- 23/03/2004
- 10:58:14
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This essay gives a good short summary. But there is a mistake: the vietnam war officially ended on 27.1.1973, when the peace treaty was signed. It can also be argued that the war actually only ended on 2.7.1976, when vietnam was unified under a communist government.
- 21/03/2004
- 10:44:59
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This is a good essay, exploring the theory of imperialism very well and looking at its on europe thorougly. The last 1-2 paragraphs exploring the affect imperialism has on nowadays society, seem too concise and lack in content. The examples could be more precise and explored more deeply. Generally, it is a good essay.
- 21/03/2004
- 10:37:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a relatively good essay. It only seems slightly thin in content for a year 13 effort. Not mentioning the \'Dolchstoss-Legende\', which was a further factor limitng the moral of the population is disappointing. Generally it is an OK essay to draw ideas from.
- 21/03/2004
- 10:28:12
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.