User Details For: SakibiHabibi

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  • Well done

    all the reasons are mentioned in the conference. also u backed them up with lots of details. ur essay is very well organized
    • 02/03/2009
    • 20:13:29
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  • Need more detail

    u are just listing the causes. u need to explain more on each action. explain the significance and the result. MORE DETAIL!!
    • 02/03/2009
    • 20:02:55
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  • Bad

    this essay isn't that written well. make the paragraphs longer with more supporting details
    • 01/03/2009
    • 22:23:03
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.