Tardiness should be accepted. So many times have I walked into a class only a few seconds late, then when I have to walk down to the clinic to sign in I have lost more class time that I would have initially when I walked in only a few seconds tardy. I wish taht my 1st period teachers agreed with you!
- 16/01/2003
- 00:47:57
- Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
very persuasive! Nicely written! Excellent work!
- 14/01/2003
- 21:31:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This could have been a quite interesting essay if you have put some thought, time and effort into your essay. It sounded like you wrote it the night before! Your ideas were repeatitive. You write much to weakly for a senior in high school.
- 13/01/2003
- 22:32:24
- Score: 16 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
Your body paragraphs were supported well and were full of nice information. However, your introduction and conclustions were somewhat lacking compared to the rest of the paper. Remember a first and last impression is crucial and if all your paragraphs are not equally as good it looses the effect.
- 13/01/2003
- 22:29:06
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay was exceptionally structured and worded. Your content was not only strong, but interesting. Your transitions flowed nicely. This is a very strong essay. I very much enjoyed reading it!
- 13/01/2003
- 22:26:14
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.