This essay is good for a quick summary of Bell's life, but could really use quite a bit more description. Try expanding more on Bell's ideas and how they have helped us develop modern tools today. Also expand on how different Bell's teaching methods were.
- 10/04/2003
- 00:36:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed how the flow of this essay (between quotations and literary comments). I also enjoyed the introduction and concluding paragraphs, and how you bring the conclusion up a level by commenting on the challenges of land and their differences. This really helps to emphasize your character contrast.
- 10/04/2003
- 00:32:25
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay lets the audience know exactly what they should go see Platoon for. I believe that you have done an excellent job in describing the movie itself and following up with some information on how the film did in the box office.
- 10/04/2003
- 00:29:56
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay and contains many technical specs on the Civic such as safetey features and reliablity, but I found that this essay could use some quotation reworking and some better word choice. Overall, good job.
- 10/04/2003
- 00:27:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Great essay. I really enjoyed reading this esaay and getting a good feel for networks in today's society and different types of networking. This paper makes it easy to quickly understand why we need networks in today's world.Good work!
- 09/04/2003
- 23:20:38
- Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.