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  • Very Creative......

    In the first paragraph you should have used a thesaurus to find another word for VOICE. I really like your story! You have a really good imagination! I do hope that it was just your imagination.
    • 24/01/2003
    • 01:57:32
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Argument

    I totally agree with the message you are trying to convey. Today sex is no longer seen as a gift from God. I think the Media is demoralizing today's youth.oh... wait a sec'. I AM TODAYS YOUTH
    • 21/01/2003
    • 02:46:47
    • Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.