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  • Good Essay

    Good essay, but you shouldn't use "I" in formal writing, or state that you're adding your opinion. The entire paper should be your opinion, with enough facts and strong enough voice to make you sound credible.Other than that, I wish I wrote this.
    • 13/03/2003
    • 08:53:48
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice.

    Kind of short, but I really liked your ending line.
    • 13/03/2003
    • 08:39:25
    • Score: 24 out of 32 people found this comment useful.
  • Ooops.

    The <i> indicates italics.
    • 12/03/2003
    • 09:22:30
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.