Conveys the idea of belonging very well. The writing style is unique. The conclusion of the story should be a lot better however your introduction was good.
- 21/03/2010
- 07:51:00
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Decent essay, descriptive, satisfactory knowledge. However what is with the inverted commas in some of the paragraphs? I thought they would be quotes...but its doesn't look like they are.
- 09/03/2010
- 02:46:32
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Well written peice of work
- 09/03/2010
- 01:39:27
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For only a 9th grader you have written this essay very well! You describe the main events of Howard Carter very well through a well though out chronological order of Howard's life.
- 21/06/2009
- 11:31:58
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Love it, well descriptive writing. Interesting plot.
- 16/06/2009
- 03:52:05
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