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  • Hmmm...

    This essay have some good points but there is a lot of grammatical errors.For example "Let's move on to his achievements, Jackman is a longtime proponent of microcredit, microcredit is a kind of small loan for the people in poverty."Instead you should say- "Let's move on to his achievements. Jackman is a longtime proponent of microcredit which is basically a small loan for the people in poverty. "
    • 01/09/2009
    • 03:58:10
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  • Very interesting

    Nice insight to "Office Politics"Improvements- Possibly list more examples... The examples listed are really interesting... should list more.
    • 01/09/2009
    • 03:51:54
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