You make me feel like I am inside the story! Well written and good choice of words! I only spotted a couple of past-present tense mistakes
- 27/09/2009
- 05:42:48
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Its a sad but true fact in the past. Great job for bringing it to light!
- 10/09/2009
- 01:38:43
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It was good, though there seem to be a bit too many events happening. Overall, it had a good plot!
- 09/09/2009
- 06:49:08
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Thank you for helping me bring the thoughts together!
- 07/09/2009
- 09:04:10
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